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2nd Jan 2019, 3:54 PM edit | delete

Welcome to permanently pissed off jerry


2nd Jan 2019, 4:44 PM edit | delete | reply

Is Dylan making a joke about Jerry, or does he know something about Rob’s Bro’s death and addressing him?

2nd Jan 2019, 4:47 PM edit | delete | reply

Addressing Rob's bro, he's having a guess at what killed him

2nd Jan 2019, 5:39 PM edit | delete | reply

You kind of feel some warmth from the semi-joke way Jerry said it and very casually :D
But what is done is done. He also cannot expect Dylan to say: "Ya, I am going to make this right."
Maybe I just figured Jerry is going to be very serious about it but kind of cool to see otherwise. Both of them are still jerks though ;)

I am passing it as coincidence for now but both groups were brothers and in both groups one came back as a ghost. But the Rob Brothers probably has a clue...

2nd Jan 2019, 5:47 PM edit | delete | reply

Right? It feels snarky and spiteful but not dead (heheh) serious. He’s rightfully mad but not in a “you’re nothing to me, you’ve corrupted your soul to the core and your sins will follow you to your early grave” type way. I feel like this is where the real Jerry truly differs from suitbitch and it’s quite reassuring to see

2nd Jan 2019, 6:11 PM edit | delete | reply

The dynamic was always good and the point here is to have that and ghosts. Not actual realistic detective mystery.
But yeah. It is just good to see Jerry can lighten it up even from beyond the grave as a true bro. Even when Suit "Jerry" was pretty much correct in most cases. What ELSE is there for him to do now?

2nd Jan 2019, 6:39 PM edit | delete | reply

I think he's probably had a lot of the anger stunned out of him when he found dylan on the cliff and now he wants to be angry again but he just feels strange

also maybe coincidence in-world but for me, I just like symmetry :}

2nd Jan 2019, 6:22 PM edit | delete | reply

You updated the cast page! I saw your post on Twitter, but I didn't expect you to finish it so fast.
I think I liked the previous one more, the idea of capturing characters' personalities with two or three catchy phrases just appeales to me for some reason (I especially liked Jerry's "now he's just a dead jerk" part). This may be important especially for new readers (as I always check the cast page first since characters are most important for me).
Also! Cast page works just fine on my PC, but on both my iPad and mobile phone it doesn't fit and I only see the left part of the images. Not sure if there's something you can do about it, but I thought you should know.
Last but not least - happy 2019, Moth c:

2nd Jan 2019, 6:25 PM edit | delete | reply

I can definitely fix that, I'm still working on it! thanks for noticing!
Hmm well the thing about the new page is I can easily edit the text because it's not an image any more :'D

Thanks! Happy 2019!

2nd Jan 2019, 6:33 PM edit | delete | reply

Are the images fixed now?

2nd Jan 2019, 8:14 PM edit | delete | reply

Yup, all fixed <3
Oh and you added "dead jerk" part, haha c:

3rd Jan 2019, 12:46 PM edit | delete | reply

No, actually, Chris' border is smaller than the rest? This seems to be a problem on all of my devices.

3rd Jan 2019, 3:18 PM edit | delete | reply

ack i can't even see this problem anywhere?
Well I'm still changing some things because the boxes all align left on some screen sizes anyway, hopefully it gets fixed along the way :s

3rd Jan 2019, 4:21 PM edit | delete | reply

Hope the image works. /Ah, it's huge, sorry about that.

3rd Jan 2019, 4:40 PM edit | delete | reply

took a stab at fixing it
now i'm much more concerned about what the hell happened to my fanart page...

2nd Jan 2019, 6:37 PM edit | delete | reply

Eh, I’ll take permanently pissed off over horrified and desolate any day. At the minimum our boy is delivering his snarky one-liners again, which seems like a good sign? And just look at that delivery of “you put a brick in my brain” - he probably feels like some kinda vengeful metal badass and draws satisfaction from that at the very least.

But man, I can’t wait to find out more about discount RobScott. What does he have against Dylan specifically? Why was he in the hospital to begin with? Was Dyl just in the wrong place at the wrong time or did he somehow contribute to his death? Also, this whole setup has got me wondering if the ghosts can physically(?) interact with each other. Somethin tells me Jer might at least try to throw hands with the guy that almost talked his bro off a cliff

2nd Jan 2019, 6:50 PM edit | delete | reply

Jerry has taken it upon himself to be as annoying as humanly possible, the pettiest form of revenge
He probably doesn't really know how he feels right now

we're not far from answers! If scott is smart, he'll just keep hiding himself from Jerry.

2nd Jan 2019, 7:06 PM edit | delete | reply

Ah yes, fake it til you make it. He’s doin a pretty good job of it, it seems.

And gahhh, the answers feel so dang close. These past ten or so pages have piled on like seventy different distinct types of suspense it’s wonderful

4th Jan 2019, 6:17 PM edit | delete | reply

"I am not gonna just say 'Yeah, you know what, we all make mistakes'"
That actually sounds like typical Jerry moment. That is something he would deliver with that annoyed expression and then waited for his friends to chuckle and clap while grinning :D
He hardly changed after death and I guess that is what is really working here, haha.

2nd Jan 2019, 6:45 PM edit | delete | reply

Just paid a visit to the new cast page as well :) I really dig the new portraits and Chris’s summary is spot on. One thing though: on Jer’s description I’m not sure if you meant “Jerry is Dylan’s brother” or if you really did intend to leave it at “Jerry is Dylan’s.” The latter is kinda hilarious though, makes me feel like he should have a shirt on that reads “If Found, Return to Dylan Fletcher”

2nd Jan 2019, 6:52 PM edit | delete | reply

it's fixed
he could probably do with a return address written on him somewhere, he's already managed to lose his scarf somehow

2nd Jan 2019, 7:13 PM edit | delete | reply

Oh man I completely forgot about the scarf. Probs just redesign but...there’s always the looming chance it’s still out there somewhere. Is there just a phantom scarf lying in some puddle on a side street? Do ghost clothes exist as a separate entity from their owner? Break out the tinfoil hats and grab some popcorn, this is the spiritual successor to everyone wondering why Jerry has a reflection

2nd Jan 2019, 11:49 PM edit | delete | reply

I feel like I'm nitpicking, but on Robin's bio, another is misspelled.

Also his picture is really cool.

3rd Jan 2019, 12:23 AM edit | delete | reply

ah it's not nitpicking, I make a lotta typos with how sloppily I type, I'd rather know and be able to fix em!
Thanks :D

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