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18th Jul 2018, 3:08 PM edit | delete

I do not like writing Vic :<



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18th Jul 2018, 3:39 PM edit | delete | reply

Why not? You do a wonderful job.


18th Jul 2018, 10:47 PM edit | delete | reply

I never knew enough about police procedures to be happy writing the detectives' side of the story... hence why I largely avoid bringing them into it (but thank you ;u;)


18th Jul 2018, 5:40 PM edit | delete | reply

:o

Looks like Dylan just slipped up!

Also it feels sad that Robin would lie about that...unless he meant someone else he thinks of as a brother.


18th Jul 2018, 10:50 PM edit | delete | reply

Gotta be tricky for Dylan to keep track of what he is and is not supposed to know!

Robin's my favourite because he's got a sad story ;)


18th Jul 2018, 11:17 PM edit | delete | reply

By my count, he slipped up twice. I mean, there's the obvious external monologue, but also Dylan's yawn. It was believable when he first met Vic, now it feels forced.

That said, it's funny to me that Vic just utterly ignores that Dylan basically asked her to slow down.

But hey, it's nice that we have Shandy's name… now we just need the first name of the Undertaker's daughter.


18th Jul 2018, 11:27 PM edit | delete | reply

Poor guy just can't hide his nervous habits! He touches his face a lot too. Meanwhile Vic ploughs on at high speed to bamboozle her foes.


19th Jul 2018, 11:36 AM edit | delete | reply

It is a slip up, but the constable will probably not note it, as it somewhat fits into the conversation.
"He was planning on joining his brother in London [but that's cannot be true.]"
"Why would he lie about that?"

My take on the situation is that Vic is suspicious about something, and she is trying to press Dylan, that's why she won't let him take a breath.



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