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Author Note

22nd Sep 2018, 2:07 PM edit | delete

Computer is fixed! Just in time, I had 1 more page of buffer :}

first panel was my fave



Comments

22nd Sep 2018, 2:27 PM edit | delete | reply

Part of me wishes there was a 'squish' sound effect in the first panel.

Most of me is super happy there isn't.

Awesome page.


22nd Sep 2018, 3:04 PM edit | delete | reply

Fortunately I think the squish is implied ;D
thanks!


22nd Sep 2018, 3:28 PM edit | delete | reply

If you replace the brother murder context with a drug addiction, this scene becomes morbidly funnier.


22nd Sep 2018, 8:25 PM edit | delete | reply

I
can't work this out


22nd Sep 2018, 8:47 PM edit | delete | reply

Sorry if that was pretty obscure. I was focusing on the "You got what you wanted! Are you happy? Are you happy now?" line.


22nd Sep 2018, 6:00 PM edit | delete | reply

Aw man the body language on this page is stellar! I can hardly believe there's still so much story left after this. I thought Dylan wouldn't confess to Jerry until much later. Very interesting....
And then there's that lingering doubt that Dylan really killed his brother at all, of course. Bravo, can't wait to see where this goes.


22nd Sep 2018, 8:32 PM edit | delete | reply

Hahaa we have a lot left to solve ;) DYlan's gotta try and make it right.

Thanks :D


22nd Sep 2018, 6:03 PM edit | delete | reply

Looks like Jerry's abandoned Dylan for good this time....


22nd Sep 2018, 8:17 PM edit | delete | reply

he'll be back given despite everything, Dylan is the only person he can communicate with.


22nd Sep 2018, 8:34 PM edit | delete | reply

Trapped with the guy who killed you, eh?


23rd Sep 2018, 6:03 PM edit | delete | reply

I agree with Amarok. Jerry does not have much choice as much as he wants it. He is a ghost and stuck in this world and his ONLY companion is his stupid brother. Nobody else sees him or can interact with him and probably even as a ghost he will start to feel lonely as hell.

Unless he finds a way to find peace but... Well. Look at the situation :D


23rd Sep 2018, 6:07 PM edit | delete | reply

Dylan, honey, what did you expect?
Did you expect Jerry saying: "Dammit, bro! You fool! Fine! Just like the old days. Happens. And do not tell Dad, okay? ;)"

Sigh... Actually, no. Dylan, you hated him so much you killed him and wanted him out of your life. Now even his ghost gave up on you. That is what you wanted.

Rejoice, Dylan! Your wish finally came true!
(bonus points for the reference)


23rd Sep 2018, 11:28 PM edit | delete | reply

Rub the blood on him, Jerry!



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