8 in Deepwell
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Author Note

5th Jan 2019, 3:19 PM edit | delete

Whew this is the last of the 'oh god how do i write this' pages, the next scene has just been straightforward and fun :}

the number of dialogue rewrites in this scene yikes


5th Jan 2019, 5:58 PM edit | delete | reply

“Dylan? When do you think the rain will stop?”

Apparently never. I love this page so much. The aerial shots are always beautiful and that rare kindness from Dyl just tossed me enough firewood to keep my heart warm for the rest of the winter. Also ten points for slav squatting Jerry and the fact that the reflection discourse is returning to tapas

5th Jan 2019, 6:23 PM edit | delete | reply

Jerry's even wearing black jacket with white (kind of) stripes, I can't unsee this, help

5th Jan 2019, 6:31 PM edit | delete | reply

Oh my god I’m so glad to see a like mind here at first it looked like our boy was REPPIN ADIDAS

5th Jan 2019, 6:38 PM edit | delete | reply

Robin is the hero you're looking for
though he's more into the fake nike

5th Jan 2019, 6:55 PM edit | delete | reply

Actual gopnik legend Robin Scott

6th Jan 2019, 7:12 PM edit | delete | reply

I approve of this Slavness
+1 mayonnaise to your comic my friend

6th Jan 2019, 7:26 PM edit | delete | reply

*obligatory bandit radio*
+2 approval

I had to narrow my eyes because it seemed to me Corey is not doing a proper Slav squat but nah, we good :D

6th Jan 2019, 7:32 PM edit | delete | reply

Oh good! Not perfect but good enough :O
The hate part is a bit iffy since you killed him but geez man this could have gone much better :(

I guess it is good Jerry is not the type to say it like he saved Dylan because he has to suffer now. Sure, he has to take responsibility and answer damn questions HOPEFULLY now we can have bro to the end :D

7th Jan 2019, 11:15 PM edit | delete | reply

Yeah he at least wants Jerry to know he doesn't hate him *right now*
The promise of having a good talk later is better than just ignoring Jerry more :P it also lets me progress the plot and put off the talking haha

6th Jan 2019, 10:57 PM edit | delete | reply

Aaaah, so this is what Dylan saw that time he hallucinated after running off from Funeral Girl!

7th Jan 2019, 4:21 AM edit | delete | reply

How long does it take to say "I didn't see you when I threw the brick?" Dylan. Seriously?

7th Jan 2019, 11:09 PM edit | delete | reply

I don't think jerry's gonna buy that, Venom :p

7th Jan 2019, 11:10 PM edit | delete | reply

Yes, Jordan! We're finally meeting the location in person :D

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