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22nd Dec 2018, 3:43 PM edit | delete

we're entering the scene that I had to keep rewriting, it's been so hard trying to balance the 'action' of this bit with the dialogue. don't wanna break the action, dn't want it to seem like jerry's just fine with the situation. let's see how it goes :S

Oh, I might not update o wednesday because that's boxing day and it seems a bit weird so I might do 2 pages next saturday instead
have a good holiday!


22nd Dec 2018, 4:39 PM edit | delete | reply


At this point, I don’t think Rob’s bro murdered Jerry, directly or otherwise. His actions, as chronicled, make a little more sense to me as retaliation for Rob’s murder and/or Dylan trying to frame Rob.

Likewise, I don’t think Corey saw what Dylan thinks he did. There’s little reason for him not to rat Dylan out if that were the case. By extension, he’s still my prime suspect for Robin’s murder.

23rd Dec 2018, 7:14 PM edit | delete | reply

Agree on both accounts.
Especially about Corey. In my opinion, Corey was about to admit that he thinks Rob killed Jerry (as Rob is still the prime suspect and it would logically make sense to a random witness like Corey) and... that he killed Rob afterwards and dumped him into the sever. Or simply killed him.
While I do find that awkward there are only maybe two things Corey wanted to say and this one makes more sense? And Corey looks like the guy who would admit that in Jerry's name no matter how bad it would sound for him.

22nd Dec 2018, 5:59 PM edit | delete | reply

Sneaky Dylan, trying to run away from being called a psycho who killed his own brother

23rd Dec 2018, 7:47 PM edit | delete | reply

if he runs fast enough the words won't be able to catch up with his ears

22nd Dec 2018, 6:24 PM edit | delete | reply

I wonder if Dylan remembers the man from the hospital...maybe there was more to that scene than was shown....

22nd Dec 2018, 6:46 PM edit | delete | reply

It’s not unreasonable. Dylan was likely treated for his bloody nose there—where people died who shouldn’t have. Makes you think wonder.

22nd Dec 2018, 9:05 PM edit | delete | reply

hmmm...more business for the funeral parlour ....

23rd Dec 2018, 7:45 PM edit | delete | reply

they're all in on it together to drum up business

23rd Dec 2018, 7:58 PM edit | delete | reply

I tend to think dylan never got his nose treated because he didn't want to be a bother while his mum was ill, though that was only mentioned in the first version I think? But it probably makes more sense for him to have done cuz it would've hurt like stink :p

23rd Dec 2018, 7:17 PM edit | delete | reply

How many people are still left who are not annoyed by Dylan's tendencies at this point? Haha :D
As skillful as he is at avoiding the inevitable.

Ghost Jerry being as straightforward as Suit Jerry right now. Seriously. Suit Jerry was a jerk but he barely lied to Dylan. Sit down with your ghost brother and settle most of it. He deserves it.

23rd Dec 2018, 7:45 PM edit | delete | reply

haha the only reason now that dylan's not talking to him abut it is... that was slowing down the pacing too much. I was going to have a proper conversation happen here but just plot-wise it felt wrong, far too slow. So you can blame me for this one and not dylan ;D

26th Dec 2018, 4:59 PM edit | delete | reply

Okay! They did talk a bit already anyway. That makes me think... Jerry has no clue whatsoever what could have caused all of this, right? No clue about how he acted and what Dylan felt back then. I mentioned previously that murder is no excuse but perhaps Jerry also needs to give it some thought... :D

26th Dec 2018, 7:43 PM edit | delete | reply

Jerry, it looks like you're the only one who can stop Dylan at this point, unless Corey is lucky. The fact that Dylan is already openly saying that he has to "get rid" of Corey lends a lot more creedence to the notion that he really did kill his brother. It could still be a delusion, but as far as I can tell, this means that Dylan is certain that he killed Jerry and that he will do anything to avoid capture. If he's not a killer now, he certainly plans to be one, and that increases the odds that he's done it before.

Here's hoping that someone can stop Dylan before he does something irreversible.

27th Dec 2018, 11:17 PM edit | delete | reply

too late, he killed his brother.

28th Dec 2018, 7:44 PM edit | delete | reply

Jerry is dead, and it certainly seems likely that Dylan is responsible for it, but we don't really know it for sure yet, because there are no reliable witnesses, not even Dylan himself.

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