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8th Sep 2018, 2:39 PM edit | delete

I really wanted to edit this BUT my pc is in the shop for repairs
he angry


8th Sep 2018, 3:20 PM edit | delete | reply

Ooh shit I see what you did there in the background effects on the last panel

8th Sep 2018, 3:35 PM edit | delete | reply

Yaay i was worried nobody was going to notice/tell what the heck it was :D

8th Sep 2018, 3:51 PM edit | delete | reply

If jerry doesn’t attempt to ghost punch dylan within the next few pages i’ll riot

8th Sep 2018, 3:54 PM edit | delete | reply


this is a family friendly comic

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8th Sep 2018, 6:20 PM edit | delete | reply

"Family Friendly"

I don't think Dylan got the memo.

8th Sep 2018, 6:24 PM edit | delete | reply


8th Sep 2018, 9:34 PM edit | delete | reply


8th Sep 2018, 5:04 PM edit | delete | reply

Dylan: "Uh... It *is* a joke?"
Jerry: "Oh. Well. Okay. Never mind then."

8th Sep 2018, 5:28 PM edit | delete | reply


8th Sep 2018, 7:00 PM edit | delete | reply

I'm glad to know that on my birthday i got the blessing of reading Jerry say the word "fuck" >:'^)

8th Sep 2018, 8:07 PM edit | delete | reply


I'm glad his potty mouth is pleasing :>

11th Sep 2018, 7:51 PM edit | delete | reply

moth you are an angel

8th Sep 2018, 8:36 PM edit | delete | reply

This is so beautifully paneled out, and really captures a realistic response from Jerry.

I really do feel for him though, because you'd have to feel betrayed in this moment. From someone you never thought would hurt you, it's turning his world upside down I'm sure.

9th Sep 2018, 6:02 PM edit | delete | reply

Thank you!

It's always a bit hard for me to decide how exactly Jerry would feel because he's dead but also not dead? He's always been hardest for me to get into his head :p

9th Sep 2018, 6:24 PM edit | delete | reply

I agree it was probably, and still is, damn hard to write. While I have no idea how I would have done it, if I were Jerry, I would not care whether I am a ghost. My brother killed me. It is a matter of principle? Hm.

8th Sep 2018, 9:37 PM edit | delete | reply

I couldn't help but notice that Jerry's gaping head wound started to gush?


Fucking hype

Also excellent use of the word "fucking", I am LOVING this

9th Sep 2018, 6:05 PM edit | delete | reply

drip drop
The question is what happens to his ghost blood when it hits the floor?

9th Sep 2018, 6:22 PM edit | delete | reply

Yeah, Jerry is pissed. Case closed.

I would have never guessed the most important and the most emotional confession in this comic would actually come out of Dylan in a very sincere way accompanied by a stream of genuine tears. I almost feel bad for him but... a deed is a deed. And deeds have consequences. That moment back then he chose to change his life forever for the worst and now suffering is the only reminder.

Now we have to wait a couple of days again but I cannot decide if Dylan has it inside him to simply turn himself in. OR if Jerry will forgive him enough to find another way. Even if it means continuing the lie to the bitter end.

10th Sep 2018, 4:52 PM edit | delete | reply

Dylan's starting to act like a Real Human Boy with feelings and stuff HUH

Do you think turning himself in will really help much? :}

12th Sep 2018, 6:03 PM edit | delete | reply

Good question. Probably not. He does not have to since Jerry cannot do anything other than screaming at him but I think the other option is getting crushed under his feelings and guilt.

10th Sep 2018, 5:05 PM edit | delete | reply

OHH SNAP IT'S GONNA HAPPEN AAAAAAAAAAA. Like I knew it WAS gonna happen but now it's ACTUALLY happening and oh my god I can't wait.

I guess my drawing was a sign o_o

10th Sep 2018, 6:00 PM edit | delete | reply

hahaa seems like everyone was just waiting fro this part :p
i'm still looking forward to the next chapter most 8)

Yiss now I can also start drawing Jerry hating Dylan ;D

10th Sep 2018, 7:25 PM edit | delete | reply

I wonder if Jerry feels like he has a tremendous headache all the time? Having a hole in your head couldn't be a pleasant feeling.

Now that Dylan has unburdened his soul, as it were, I wonder if Dapper Jerry will show up again, or if that was just his conscience playing devil's advocate? Or will this take an even more surreal turn and Dylan is only dreaming this nightmare scenario?

Vote-a-lope, people! We're back in the 1,000 range instead of where we should be. ;)

10th Sep 2018, 7:51 PM edit | delete | reply

He does say his head hurts when he first shows up, but it doesn't hurt as much as it can (he was supposed to be in a lot of pain after re-experiencing his death).

as for the rest, we shall have to see

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