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Author Note

4th Apr 2018, 3:21 PM edit | delete

I struggled through black and white shading on my poor tiny laptop. it wasn't very happy about it. in other news, the big laptop has decided it's okay now so I just need to find my stupid serial number for Corel and everything is peachy

so ends the saga of my slightly dodgy PC. time to get on with this Rob business >:)



Comments

4th Apr 2018, 3:40 PM edit | delete | reply

I was thinking, if Dylan says he never knew Rob, maybe the memory of killing Rob is fake and was created by suit Jerry. If that could be the case, maybe his memory of killing Jerry is also fake...


4th Apr 2018, 3:42 PM edit | delete | reply

Also the page looks really cool in black and white.


4th Apr 2018, 6:52 PM edit | delete | reply

Something is really, really not right here.
I have a strong suspicion Suit Jerry is Ghost Jerry's bad side. The side which was always problematic and hateful. Look how dang close Ghost Jerry is to switching between his (possibly) two sides. Like they always were the same person/ghost.
Weird gut feeling on my end if anything.

It is like Jerry is seriously bating Dylan into something. Heck! What if he even knows already? If Jerry perhaps killed Rob the same way Dylan killed Jerry then Jerry might as well be using his Suit side to do exactly that.

I am waiting for: "So, bro, by the way, did you kill me? Heh."


5th Apr 2018, 12:20 AM edit | delete | reply

"Something is really, really not right here"—SECONDED WITH FEELING


4th Apr 2018, 6:48 PM edit | delete | reply

Heh. Dylan's reaction is not as careful in my opinion. That is not exactly how you react to a dead body you just found. Unless you really do not care OR you also did something so it is just familiar. The question is whether Jerry has any reason to suspect anything so it might be a test of sorts...

Still, probably better this way? Calling the police would only make Dylan even more suspicious. Why would you go to a random drain and find a body that just happens to be Rob who killed your bro? Hm.
Maybe at least make an anonymous call? Give a tip in some way?
But then Dylan is probably afraid the crumbs would lead to him sooner or later.


4th Apr 2018, 9:53 PM edit | delete | reply

I mean it's still a body he hasn't actually seen, he's just heard his brother babbling about how happy he is about the whole situation. Dunno if he can be sure Rob really is down there, not to mention if he had anything to do with it or not...


4th Apr 2018, 8:04 PM edit | delete | reply

Fuck. XD This is great.
Just read through the archive for the third time and Imm all caught up! There was like an entire chapter I hadn't read before. Keep up the great work Moth!


4th Apr 2018, 9:56 PM edit | delete | reply

Aw thank you Jack! Haha did you not read that far before, or did you just manage to skip a whole chapter? XD


4th Apr 2018, 10:07 PM edit | delete | reply

Last time I read this your latest page was at the end of the scene with Corey at the bus stop I think!


5th Apr 2018, 4:38 AM edit | delete | reply

Glad your big laptop decided it was feeling better. I feel your pain when it comes to trying to work on sub-par equipment.


5th Apr 2018, 11:35 PM edit | delete | reply

Heck yeah! Now I just need my art program back! :D


9th Apr 2018, 11:47 PM edit | delete | reply

I like both Omar's and MadJak's suspicions about Ghost Jerry, and about all I can say is you did a tremendous job on the art even without color, so kudos to you! Glad your computer is okay though, apparently. :)



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