Moth
Mm m, here we go. I'm pretty pumped for some of the stuff in this chapter. This is where the mystery really starts... Also! Corey's hair! That's how it used to look in every previous version!
MadJak91
Makes sense. Most kids I knew who were into fights turned out to have only one parent or somehow non-working family. Looking for some weird kind of acknowledgment but it is really common. Or at least was when I was a kid, haha.
I never really knew anyone who would fight but, but I could understand that.
joeyballast
I'm lookin' forward to this chapter, too! Nothin' better than a chapter that a writer's excited for. Corey's just always got that beatific smile, eh?
Hey, smiling more makes you a happier person! Hehe, glad to transfer some of my own hype :)
Unfortunately they became too luscious to handle and he had to cut them off :(
Author Note
Moth
Mm m, here we go. I'm pretty pumped for some of the stuff in this chapter. This is where the mystery really starts...
Also! Corey's hair! That's how it used to look in every previous version!
Comments
MadJak91
Makes sense. Most kids I knew who were into fights turned out to have only one parent or somehow non-working family. Looking for some weird kind of acknowledgment but it is really common. Or at least was when I was a kid, haha.
Moth
I never really knew anyone who would fight but, but I could understand that.
joeyballast
I'm lookin' forward to this chapter, too! Nothin' better than a chapter that a writer's excited for.
Corey's just always got that beatific smile, eh?
Moth
Hey, smiling more makes you a happier person!
Hehe, glad to transfer some of my own hype :)
Moth
Unfortunately they became too luscious to handle and he had to cut them off :(