Anyway yeah this got a like 60% redraw in the last 3 hours rip
The last panel had a sort of very boring angle and 3 of these panels were missing so yeah, I added those
And a bunch of hands
why not
glad suit boy's enjoying himself
I’m glad you took the time to redraw because this is some fine USDA certified BEEF right here. Not sure how it was before but as of now the last half of the page is a four hit combo of “oh fuck.” The hands look rad. Also I’m mad hyped to find out more about our ghost of medical malpractice past here. How the hell is he angry enough to bring down parts of a BUILDING? Wtf did our boys do?
Ok wow ye this is much better. Old layout carries more of a “oh, he got his jacket wet” vibe as opposed to this one in which the threat of death seems very real
The hands are a genius touch, so glad you added more in. It really conveys the claustrophobia of being boxed into an environment that someone else controls, and the implied manipulation is far more powerful than the outright punch in the old version.
This.
Also, kinda makes you wonder whose story this really is. Dylan's or Psycho Ghost's.
The old version also ended MUCH sooner but I wonder if it still followed the exact same narrative? At least the way I got it was that in the old version Dylan seemed even more of a jackass and probably really murdered Jerry out of hate.
But ya. That is no longer important, is it? :D
Legacy issues :Y
The old version kind of team out of plot where I stopped, I think I intended Dylan to go to the hospital but definitely not for this. There was also none of the Dylan seeing visions stuff planned until a short way into this version.
Words but his grasp is too strong :<
Dylan, you are going to need a ghost to fight a ghost! If Psycho Ghost can do this then surely Jerry can interfere! Come on!
I THINK the he is using "prison" as blackmail at this point. One time he said he does not want Dylan to go there and in my opinion Dylan is his only way to accomplish what he wants. Throwing him in jail would play against him I would say. But it is a strong reason for Dylan to play along. Sure :/
He says whatever he thinks is going to get to Dylan most. He claimed he wanted to go Dylan because that would mean making him do more bad things, now he's going hard on the fact that dylan can't actually fix anything :}
Author Note
Moth
HERE'S THE BEEF MISSELANEY
Anyway yeah this got a like 60% redraw in the last 3 hours rip
The last panel had a sort of very boring angle and 3 of these panels were missing so yeah, I added those
And a bunch of hands
why not
glad suit boy's enjoying himself
Comments
Rodriguez
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=idnwh6iDnXA
Moth
WHAT AN ADVERT
10/10
Venom
Drivers in New Orleans be like:
griffsketch
I’m glad you took the time to redraw because this is some fine USDA certified BEEF right here. Not sure how it was before but as of now the last half of the page is a four hit combo of “oh fuck.” The hands look rad. Also I’m mad hyped to find out more about our ghost of medical malpractice past here. How the hell is he angry enough to bring down parts of a BUILDING? Wtf did our boys do?
Moth
here's how it looked before! much tidier but also pretty stale I think
and sure he's angry but look at that face of unhinged glee 8D
griffsketch
Ok wow ye this is much better. Old layout carries more of a “oh, he got his jacket wet” vibe as opposed to this one in which the threat of death seems very real
Jordan Gray
"our ghost of medical malpractice past"
this moniker is everything
Jordan Gray
The hands are a genius touch, so glad you added more in. It really conveys the claustrophobia of being boxed into an environment that someone else controls, and the implied manipulation is far more powerful than the outright punch in the old version.
MadJak91
This.
Also, kinda makes you wonder whose story this really is. Dylan's or Psycho Ghost's.
The old version also ended MUCH sooner but I wonder if it still followed the exact same narrative? At least the way I got it was that in the old version Dylan seemed even more of a jackass and probably really murdered Jerry out of hate.
But ya. That is no longer important, is it? :D
Legacy issues :Y
Moth
The old version kind of team out of plot where I stopped, I think I intended Dylan to go to the hospital but definitely not for this. There was also none of the Dylan seeing visions stuff planned until a short way into this version.
Jordan Gray
I keep remembering Bolderousness' comment in the Bonfire arc:
[quote]"I just realized how this entire story is basically Dylan versus The Abstract Artistic Structure of the Comic, and I love it."[/quote]
MadJak91
Once VR is totally a thing this is how it is going to feel for real when somebody or the author messes with your expectations or thoughts :D
Moth
Thanks Jordan! I think the blue gutter instead of white helps the boxed in feeling too, I'm glad I changed it!
MadJak91
Words but his grasp is too strong :<
Dylan, you are going to need a ghost to fight a ghost! If Psycho Ghost can do this then surely Jerry can interfere! Come on!
I THINK the he is using "prison" as blackmail at this point. One time he said he does not want Dylan to go there and in my opinion Dylan is his only way to accomplish what he wants. Throwing him in jail would play against him I would say. But it is a strong reason for Dylan to play along. Sure :/
Moth
He says whatever he thinks is going to get to Dylan most. He claimed he wanted to go Dylan because that would mean making him do more bad things, now he's going hard on the fact that dylan can't actually fix anything :}
Rodriguez
I'm gonna be back here at 730 pst because I wake up and I fuckin manually TYPE IN je-re-my.webcomic.ws like a CHAMP on my cellphone from the bed
And I'm gonna be looking for that 85-15 chuck do you hear me
Moth
AaaAAA BUT I DON'T GET HOME UNTIL THEN
It's gonna be like ten minutes after :'(
Rodriguez
*stares like an imperious housecat*
...acceptable