9-10 in A Bad Thing
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Author Note

11th Sep 2016, 6:46 PM edit | delete

I was supposed to post this yesterday, but I forgot to set it to auto update and then went away for the weekend! Sorry!
I'll unmerge these two pages later, I just didn't think that there was enough content to put them separately.
This is the last weird red page, I promise~



Comments

11th Sep 2016, 7:28 PM edit | delete | reply

RIP in pieces


11th Sep 2016, 8:57 PM edit | delete | reply

That's it, Jerry's dead, show's over, we can all go home now.


11th Sep 2016, 9:26 PM edit | delete | reply

I need a little reminder and then I will stop with comparisons. This is its own thing.
Just curious.
Looks more like jealousy this time. If I recall the previous one, it was more about screwed up sibling relationship and the stairs incident.


11th Sep 2016, 10:44 PM edit | delete | reply

The stairs incident may or may not still rear its ugly head later on.
Jealousy was always supposed to be a part of it, but I guess I didn't put much emphasis on it last time? Dylan doesn't consider Jerry worth anyone's attention, so he hates when he gets it.


12th Sep 2016, 2:00 AM edit | delete | reply

*rolls credits*


13th Sep 2016, 10:00 PM edit | delete | reply

Join us for the inevitable sequel


12th Sep 2016, 2:50 AM edit | delete | reply

*Intense intensifies*


13th Sep 2016, 10:46 PM edit | delete | reply

Intenseness overload! Shutting down.


12th Sep 2016, 2:52 AM edit | delete | reply

This page is so freaking well drawn I can't handle it right now


13th Sep 2016, 10:22 PM edit | delete | reply

oooo thank you :o
I had to draw it on a really slow computer, so I spent pretty long on it haha


13th Sep 2016, 5:09 PM edit | delete | reply

Nice.

Most of the time with murder stories I have a really hard time sympathizing with the murderer. Their reasons are usually very, well, complicated. And therefore petty.

This is a simple, very BELIEVABLE, crime of passion.

It's good stuff.

Well, it's terrible, I mean someone just got a brick to the head.

But writing-wise, it's good stuff.

Also visually stunning.

I'll stop now...




13th Sep 2016, 10:45 PM edit | delete | reply

I can't remember which detective series it was that had a murderer kill someone because they were going to disprove his scientific paper. Best motive.

But wow, thank you! I get kinda nervous writing parts like this, so that's amazing to hear.


7th Apr 2017, 10:24 PM edit | delete | reply

OMG I absolutely love the layout and the colors of this page. It's beautifully done.
Also loving the story so far, can't wait to read more!


12th Jan 2018, 7:11 PM edit | delete | reply

holy moly This is hardcore! I strangely relate to this tho not the killing part!



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