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Author Note

5th Apr 2017, 4:00 PM edit | delete

Jerry, you're really bad at being dead.

oof sorry for being slack on replies, I've been distracted by stuff

4 more pages of this chapter :¬)



Comments

5th Apr 2017, 4:23 PM edit | delete | reply

Augh, Jerry putting his fingers into his forehead made my delicate stomach cringe a bit xD

And yes, Jerry is bad at being dead


5th Apr 2017, 4:30 PM edit | delete | reply

Yeah, that bit's kinda gross :P Jerry is also supposed to have a slight fear of blood, so it just gets better for him!


5th Apr 2017, 5:58 PM edit | delete | reply

Oh-
I
feel as ill as he looks
It's not a very nice way to find out that you're dead


5th Apr 2017, 8:20 PM edit | delete | reply

Hmm, and he still doesn't even quite believe it :<


5th Apr 2017, 7:20 PM edit | delete | reply

Y'know, you've done something quite interesting here, by showing us Jeremy through Dylan's eyes at first, which makes him not sympathetic or appealing. But now we're actually getting to meet him and judge him for ourselves, and with him in such a sad an vulnerable state (that last panel!) the sympathy roles seem to be reversing a bit...


5th Apr 2017, 8:33 PM edit | delete | reply

I feel like everyone likes Jerry at first, but the thing is he's only really nice when he's scared

Let's see if I can yoyo those sympathy roles about a bit >:)


5th Apr 2017, 7:23 PM edit | delete | reply

Aw, man. Last panel gives me all the feels. Looks so forlorn as Dylan walks away.


5th Apr 2017, 8:45 PM edit | delete | reply

Ah, he'll be fine! He can take care of himself. probably.


5th Apr 2017, 8:41 PM edit | delete | reply

I feel like this could be all avoided by simply telling him the harsh insane truth that he killed him...
Nobody else (probably) can see Jerry so maybe he would drop it out of grief and the fact that his bro killed him. Nah. Not that easy plus you never know. Gotta keep the deed secret!


5th Apr 2017, 8:47 PM edit | delete | reply

At this rate, Jerry probably wouldn't believe that either. Or give Dylan a real nasty haunting, once he gets used to the whole being a ghost thing.


6th Apr 2017, 6:14 PM edit | delete | reply

The skull panel made me cringe, aaaugh.


8th Apr 2017, 8:46 PM edit | delete | reply

Hehe, well I aim to please :P



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