29 in The Funeral
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Author Note

1st Apr 2017, 10:25 PM edit | delete

At last, Dylan! That wasn't so hard, was it?



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1st Apr 2017, 10:41 PM edit | delete | reply

I can't help but imagine the girl in the funeral parlour standing at the window, watching as Dylan scrambles amongst the gravestones gesturing wildly and arguing with thin air.

Awesome page, by the way. That graveyard would be one hell of a place to play hide and seek. All the graveyards where I live are wiiiiiiiiide open. Having a forest graveyard would be badass.


1st Apr 2017, 10:49 PM edit | delete | reply

Haha, yep! At least he's partly hidden by the trees and... at least she already knows he's kind of a weird one.

The only graveyards I've been in have been totally tree'd. More foresty than this one!


3rd Apr 2017, 12:29 PM edit | delete | reply

"I'm pretty sure I just figured out teleportation"...

I feel sorry for Jerry, but this - this is a very funny reaction to being dead.


3rd Apr 2017, 6:04 PM edit | delete | reply

Well, at least Dylan has a really good excuse. Anyone would react similarly disturbed if they family member returned from the dead.
He does not even have to tell him what happened. Just that he died and it is a psychological bad joke...


3rd Apr 2017, 8:27 PM edit | delete | reply

Just because you seem like a perfectionist, I thought I'd point out that I read the first two word bubbles as Jeremy's in the upper left, then Dylan's "You're not real" right below it. Not sure if you meant it that way?

And if you want me to shut up with the feedback and just enjoy the story with non-critical comments, please let me know, I certainly won't be offended! And I will continue to love the story, as always ^_^

That outta the way, man I wonder how Jeremy's gonna react :O


3rd Apr 2017, 8:47 PM edit | delete | reply

Oh yeah, it's supposed to be that order! Takes a while for Jerry to actually realise what Dylan said.

No, I don't mind feedback! Things like that are useful, thank you :>

He may just end up even more confused, poor boy.



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