19 in The Funeral
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Author Note

8th Feb 2017, 8:06 PM edit | delete

Uhh so this page, I decided was totally unnecessary and if anything detracts from the flow of the story, and I thought of a much better way to transition to this scene... right after I'd finished drawing this and the next page. So I'm throwing out an extra update as a kind of compromise. At some point in the future, this page may disappear :¬)



Comments

8th Feb 2017, 8:34 PM edit | delete | reply

Ooh, some insight from Dylan!

For some reason I wouldn't have thought that Dylan would have called an ambulance right away, rather that he'd have stayed mad and upset for another long while, had it taken longer for Jerry to die. He came to his senses pretty soon, then. Sadly, AFTER killing his brother.


9th Feb 2017, 11:10 PM edit | delete | reply

Mm, once he realised what he'd actually done... Snapped him out of it pretty fast, I guess.


8th Feb 2017, 10:48 PM edit | delete | reply

Nah, this page is good. As someone who didn't read before the reboot it gives more about the background. The transition is just fine. Keep it up, enjoying it!


9th Feb 2017, 11:12 PM edit | delete | reply

Ah, thanks! I always get worried that there is just too much Dylan talking to himself at this bit and not enough actually happening, so... extra update to make it go quicker :P


9th Feb 2017, 11:27 PM edit | delete | reply

personally i do like when characters talk to themselves. :P also you could argue that he is talking to his brother :D


8th Feb 2017, 11:01 PM edit | delete | reply

Hard cut to Dylan digging up the grave... *shudder*


9th Feb 2017, 11:14 PM edit | delete | reply

It's okay, I don't think he brought a shovel. Maybe he can use his hands.


9th Feb 2017, 11:47 PM edit | delete | reply

Somehow that's much much more horrifying...


10th Feb 2017, 8:49 PM edit | delete | reply

He is definitely still in his regret cooldown phase to the point he looks kind of bipolar.
Dylan, you do not just decide "man, maybe this sucks" about this sort of thing...
Get a gri-- Nah. Not supporting you.


4th Apr 2018, 7:28 PM edit | delete | reply

I am in love with this entire page. What good dialogue. >:|



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