10 in The Funeral
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Author Note

16th Dec 2016, 9:13 PM edit | delete

Is this page one day early or six days late? We may never know.
Anyway, posting now to make up for not getting a page out this week. I rather like this one. It's got weird perspectives and dramatic closeups of mundane things and sound effects and y'all know how much I love those.



Comments

17th Dec 2016, 2:46 AM edit | delete | reply

so many things i love about those last two panels that i don't even know where to start hngggg

just to begin, i love the semi distorted perspective of that second to last panel-- like a fishbowl, so you can kind of feel that "everyone's eyes are on me" vibe that the last panel cranks up to 11, like the attention and the pressure are just building and AUGH SO GOOD I LOVE IT


17th Dec 2016, 10:56 AM edit | delete | reply

Aaa thank you :D
I was kinda worried the eyes looked a little goofy, but I was pretty happy with the weird perspective myself~


17th Dec 2016, 3:15 AM edit | delete | reply

is... he flipping them off? xD


17th Dec 2016, 10:23 AM edit | delete | reply

He wasn't meant to be, but I like it.


17th Dec 2016, 6:54 AM edit | delete | reply

ooo love that fisheye lens perspective


17th Dec 2016, 10:24 AM edit | delete | reply

It's my all-time favourite type of perspective :>


17th Dec 2016, 5:12 PM edit | delete | reply

Cool page!

And they're right, Dylan probably shouldn't be there so soon.


17th Dec 2016, 9:58 PM edit | delete | reply

Thanks!
Yeah. He could at least have waited until it was old news for his peers.


18th Dec 2016, 12:13 AM edit | delete | reply

I'm likin' the fish-eye perspective in the second to last panel. It's not 'overdone' if you get what I mean.


18th Dec 2016, 8:05 PM edit | delete | reply

Thanks :>
Funnily enough, I discovered my art program has a fish-eye perspective tool right after finishing that panel...


18th Dec 2016, 7:41 PM edit | delete | reply

Recent events or not, I would not be surprised if this is the usual for Dylan.
He seems like the type to just go to school and then home without interacting much with his class. For a selected few friends who will not stay quiet.


18th Dec 2016, 8:06 PM edit | delete | reply

Pretty much, but with fewer people talking about him behind his back.


21st Dec 2016, 12:11 AM edit | delete | reply

Oh gawd that awkward feeling of walking into a full classroom. Made a million times more awkward in this situation, of course.


21st Dec 2016, 4:17 PM edit | delete | reply

At least there's only 9 other people in the class. Dylan's lucky I'm so lazy :¬)


4th Jan 2017, 1:34 PM edit | delete | reply

the blond guy is back D:
He doesn't even have to do anything to give me the creeps, uuuuh...


4th Jan 2017, 2:16 PM edit | delete | reply

Hehe poor guy! I think I accidentally made him kinda cute this time though.


4th Jan 2017, 3:01 PM edit | delete | reply

mmmm, okay, I admit it, he's not bad looking.
Just creepy, never understood what he had in mind. This time, I'll figure it out. u.u


24th Mar 2017, 8:09 PM edit | delete | reply

Gosh, the eye motif in that last panel is so effective.


26th Mar 2017, 8:56 PM edit | delete | reply

Thank you :D


5th Jun 2017, 11:30 AM edit | delete | reply

Teach me the laws of perspective 😊



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