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16th Feb 2019, 3:01 PM edit | delete

don't worry he's just passed out!
i'm sure he'll be fiiine!



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16th Feb 2019, 3:14 PM edit | delete | reply

; _ ;


16th Feb 2019, 4:49 PM edit | delete | reply

he died as he lived, grumpy and lonely
i mean passed out


16th Feb 2019, 3:59 PM edit | delete | reply

The area around that wound is NOT looking too good. Also, familiar bloodstain. Heck, it doesn’t seem our boy has much time left


16th Feb 2019, 4:49 PM edit | delete | reply

someone really should have caught that rash earlier!


16th Feb 2019, 4:39 PM edit | delete | reply

Hmm…

To be honest, this exchange make me a little more suspicious of Chris. Both he and Mal were physically harmed by Jerry, and both Mal and he have some connection with the Sun mosaic.

Feels like I'm reading too much into this scene though. I mean, both would have motivation to harm Jerry, but actual murder? Couple it with both incidents being years displaced from current events and it feels like something big is missing.


16th Feb 2019, 4:48 PM edit | delete | reply

For a long while I always assumed the scene with Chris was just characterization for Jerry. But it’s starting to look more and more like he’s deeper in this mess than he seems


16th Feb 2019, 4:50 PM edit | delete | reply

CHRis
I love chris-suspicion, is he so chilled out that he goes too far and seems sketchy?


16th Feb 2019, 4:58 PM edit | delete | reply

I’m still faulting him for that one time he looked slightly sketchy walking up the stairs

http://je-re-my.thecomicseries.com/comics/173
y’know, this one


16th Feb 2019, 5:02 PM edit | delete | reply

THAt's a tricky angle to draw


16th Feb 2019, 5:14 PM edit | delete | reply

For me, it's a conservation of detail issue. He's a major minor character, yet has no meaningful ties to any current events. (Wasn't involved in any recent fights, not tied to Rob/Mal, etc) It's clear that you have plans for him—his friendship with Corey, and subsequently Dylan, is suspect—but it's difficult to deduce what his role, past or future, is.


17th Feb 2019, 7:24 PM edit | delete | reply

Interesting point!
I will only add that even Mal was not exactly thrilled by Chris and his Sun mosaic. I am simply not totally buying that school project suggestion. Too suspicious if you ask me but I also do not have anything further than that.

Also, it is quite hard for me to go back and start suspecting Chris again but chances are we still do not know the full story. If this here was the initial event that pushed everything until current time then that is just too easy?


16th Feb 2019, 4:43 PM edit | delete | reply

if he died here then his cause of death would be getting owned by a lil kid

which would be the BEST reason to be a vengeful ghost


16th Feb 2019, 4:51 PM edit | delete | reply

that or 'fell-out-of-bed to death', either way he's gotta be pretty sour about it


16th Feb 2019, 4:52 PM edit | delete | reply

“Oh, you just fuckin wait til your brother grows big enough to hold a cinderblock, I’ll get you right back”


16th Feb 2019, 5:13 PM edit | delete | reply

I guess Dylan can't complain now. I mean, damn.


16th Feb 2019, 5:28 PM edit | delete | reply

boy thought nobody loved HIM?


16th Feb 2019, 5:25 PM edit | delete | reply

Well...
Luckily, he is already in a hospital...


16th Feb 2019, 5:27 PM edit | delete | reply

unlucky it happens to be THIS hospital
there's a reason it got shut down ;)


16th Feb 2019, 11:07 PM edit | delete | reply

Well, I'm wondering if he made sure Jeremy died for this (and Dylan suffered and maybe died), and Robin and his Mom die for not being there. Nurse on staff might want to watch their back too.


17th Feb 2019, 1:42 PM edit | delete | reply

And even the building's in ruins! Dude doesn't mess around.


17th Feb 2019, 1:47 PM edit | delete | reply

every time some kid comes up to the hospital to spray graffiti and shit, Malachy has a field day


16th Feb 2019, 11:18 PM edit | delete | reply

Okay, Jerry was definitely a nasty little brat, even if that guy slapped him. Yanking an IV away could be fatal in some circumstances. Suddenly I don't feel that much sympathy for Jerry.


17th Feb 2019, 3:04 PM edit | delete | reply

Yeah Jerry never learned to think about the consequences of his actions. or much about anyone else really.


17th Feb 2019, 7:29 PM edit | delete | reply

This... is a bit too much? I expected something of this sort but then actually seeing it is much worse :/
You cannot even pin this on kids anymore. This is what you can legit called a deliberate attempt at somebody's life.

Even this far in the past, I actually appreciate when you remind us the boys never were exactly saints and both were and are quite the bastards...
Hopefully there was hospital personnel because otherwise I am not sure how this got covered up...


17th Feb 2019, 8:00 PM edit | delete | reply

Had to be something worthy of ten years of haunting! Malachy is vindictive but not totally unfair. honestly i was worried it would seem too petty since this didn't kill him, but uh
malachy doesn't know that
I think it seems suitably awful now :}


19th Feb 2019, 10:39 AM edit | delete | reply

Aaaaaaah
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

I just finished catching up on everything and it was- aaaaaaaaah

It's amazing, I remember your old stuff, all the way you did, I can see all your efforts adn work! The clever pagemaking (is that even how you say that? haha) Anyway, it was a blast and I'm really glad for following you all this time hehehehe

Looking forward to more!! Feels like almost the end. I love the progress of the story and everything, at some point I really thought it was Dylan going crazy but now he's some sort of medium and it was Jerry's fault all along if he was haunted haha. The-- circle is complete? In French we have this saying for that, saying that the loop has been completed. But blah, I'm being talkative. ;))

BRAVO!!


19th Feb 2019, 8:49 PM edit | delete | reply

ahhh thank you noiv!

It is quite near the end, two chapters left! I'm pretty excited for it, and I'm glad you're still enjoying it too :'D the twins have indeed been through a lot these last chapters haha

thanks for the kind words aaa <3 <3


20th Feb 2019, 5:34 PM edit | delete | reply

In the hallowed words of MissElaney

The BEEF, Moth

WHERE is the BEEF?


20th Feb 2019, 6:05 PM edit | delete | reply

HOLY SHIT I FORGOT ENTIRELY THAT IT WAS WEDNESDAY
kinda
got stressed over somethin else


20th Feb 2019, 7:50 PM edit | delete | reply

No worries my dude, sometimes it be like that



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