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12th Jan 2019, 3:27 PM edit | delete

been looking forward to update days a lot recently :D



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12th Jan 2019, 6:06 PM edit | delete | reply

The regret is lookin real here. Man I’m really starting to feel for Dyl


12th Jan 2019, 8:50 PM edit | delete | reply

It's a super ANGRY regret


12th Jan 2019, 6:41 PM edit | delete | reply

Typical! Suit Jerry has been annoying him all the time - but just when he needs a scapegoat...


12th Jan 2019, 8:49 PM edit | delete | reply

Dyl's just gonna keep messing up his building until he shows himself


13th Jan 2019, 8:48 PM edit | delete | reply

Hah. I guess we always come back to: "You cannot blame this on something else."

It is personal preference but I see supernatural means as a valid reason. As sad as it is ultimately. You can potentially discuss a problem, its cause and the effect when the scapegoat is another person or something, to us, real but when it comes to ghost influences it is hard for me NOT to blame that phenomenon.
Like... It is harder to blame Dylan now or accuse him because what do you do against a force that is completely out of your hands??
I guess I am also in the camp that the Force is the source of ALL trouble in SW...


12th Jan 2019, 11:55 PM edit | delete | reply

I don´t know what it is, but on the last panel, there is something missing in "D"s
expresion.
I don´t want to say it´s bland, BUT it missing SOMETHING.

Mabye clanched teath will ad tentshion to that expresion and mabye ad some wrinkles around the mouth and tilt head so Dylan´s looking down whitch will ad more sadnes or regreat and mabe open the mouth bit more and let him yell that last bubble.


13th Jan 2019, 12:32 AM edit | delete | reply

Hmm i think maybe the eyes need to be more screwed up
Kind of going for a sort of flinchy yelp

I tweaked it a little but I don't think I want to change it too much!


13th Jan 2019, 4:53 PM edit | delete | reply

Oh my god, what if their mother is a ghost too?


16th Jan 2019, 4:49 PM edit | delete | reply

that would be pretty weird, they haven't seen her in ten years :o


13th Jan 2019, 4:53 PM edit | delete | reply

Oh my god, what if their mother is a ghost too?


13th Jan 2019, 7:28 PM edit | delete | reply

Dylan we know what happened the last time you had a weapon and were under a lot of stress. But better to take it out on the building than your bro :(

Sad. It is like Dylan has only this night to get things done. He is way too deep in this crap now. If I were him, this would be the feeling when it feels like the day just will not end and you want to squeeze as many "extra" hours as possible.
Kinda nervous what is he going to do afterwards. What then? Blame it officially on ghosts? But yeah. Getting ahead :D


16th Jan 2019, 4:48 PM edit | delete | reply

Lucky nobody else is around right now, huh?
Yeah he's thinking of this as his Last Night, trying to at least understand what's going on even if e doesn't rally know what to do about it,


16th Jan 2019, 4:29 PM edit | delete | reply

OK it's Wednesday where the fuck is the beef


16th Jan 2019, 4:47 PM edit | delete | reply

I JUSt did IT


16th Jan 2019, 5:20 PM edit | delete | reply

I love how this page is set up!



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