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Author Note

1st Dec 2018, 3:01 PM edit | delete

Nothing bad could happen.



Comments

1st Dec 2018, 3:11 PM edit | delete | reply

Moth. For a short period of time, it would be hilarious if you gave everyone glasses for an update or two. No real reason. Just 'cause.


1st Dec 2018, 3:20 PM edit | delete | reply

maybe for april fools :¬)


1st Dec 2018, 4:20 PM edit | delete | reply

Shit. That comment was anonymous. Damn library computers. - Bolderousness


1st Dec 2018, 4:25 PM edit | delete | reply

haha
i suspected it was you


1st Dec 2018, 3:11 PM edit | delete | reply

Oh nooo. I really should have seen this coming.


1st Dec 2018, 3:21 PM edit | delete | reply

the real reason i showed him throwing the keys into the quarry in chapter 1 ;)


1st Dec 2018, 3:52 PM edit | delete | reply

The story isn't over tho because there are unresolved things that would make jumping and dying and 'that's it' be super letdown city, but call me interested :v


1st Dec 2018, 5:49 PM edit | delete | reply

Well, no one would stop Dylan from solving the mystery if he was a ghost himself c:


1st Dec 2018, 7:53 PM edit | delete | reply

you sayin my ending is a letdown :¬(

Nah there's 3 more chapters

@guest also true


2nd Dec 2018, 12:40 AM edit | delete | reply

NOTHING BUT LET DOWNS MOTH
NOTHING


2nd Dec 2018, 5:25 PM edit | delete | reply

DO YOU HAVE SHARES IN THIS WORK? HUH? HUH!?


4th Dec 2018, 5:34 PM edit | delete | reply

N-no


1st Dec 2018, 6:51 PM edit | delete | reply

Interesting definition of "help".

Anyways, Remember when Dylan supposedly dragged Robin off and ended up in the drain? I don't believe the next sequence of events is going to help clear Dylan any

As an aside, I love how Noose Hill has been portrayed so much in this comic that you can recognize where we are. (Also the framing in the second to last panel is great)


1st Dec 2018, 7:55 PM edit | delete | reply

'I'll help you,,,, by constantly criticising everything you do' :¬D

Thanks! That panel was giving me lots of problems to draw, mostly colour-wise :{ Glad it turned out good!


1st Dec 2018, 10:24 PM edit | delete | reply

I can't wait for the next page! (LOL, no pressure, just excited!)


1st Dec 2018, 10:31 PM edit | delete | reply

haha it's on wednesday! i might even post the last 2 pages of the chapter at once.
I realised I haven't really got it written anywhere that this updates sat/wed!


2nd Dec 2018, 8:23 AM edit | delete | reply

Good to know! Thanks for the update :D


2nd Dec 2018, 5:31 PM edit | delete | reply

Dylan, sonny, we have already done this a few times. I like how smug Suit Jerry is. He hardly does anything to piss Dylan off and asking the same questions works because he still has not obtained satisfactory answers other than "Go away!"

To make matters worse, it has been a few minutes maybe and Dylan's act should be plenty suspicious by now. If Vic knew about the bonfire meeting then even more so...
I will snicker if it turns out someone (like Corey) followed Dylan and is observing him screaming BS out into the dark forest. Heh.

But anyway. We know that Dylan had a few monologues about Jerry before he killed him. Now he is saying Suit Jerry made him to. While something did happen in the past I am not buying it either. At most it just pushed the idea that Suit Jerry is just as much real as Dylan's ever increasing mental breakdown and difficulties to keep his conscience the way he would prefer...


2nd Dec 2018, 7:01 PM edit | delete | reply

Dylan's really quite lucky nobody ever is listening, huh? wonder when his luck will run out.

To be totally fair to dylan his monologuing about jerry technically came after he killed him when he's telling us about it.
at this point it seems like he's just blaming the part of himself that wanted jerry dead


2nd Dec 2018, 7:36 PM edit | delete | reply

Fair enough! Then before that. He disliked Jerry since school at least or maybe since they were kids. But yes.
That is what makes it interesting. Who is he blaming in reality. Him or Suit Jerry who might him and therefore it is the same? We shall see :D
He found somebody to blame but forgot he had those thoughts before he even knew Suit Jerry. Could have been some influence, sure, but now I am repeating myself ;)
Okay!



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