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28th Nov 2018, 3:43 PM edit | delete

3 more pages...
i was gonna take a break to work on a short raining knives AU story but I'm rethinking that because I like this bit


28th Nov 2018, 5:03 PM edit | delete | reply

I love "Jerry's" expression in the last panel *^*
On the one hand, I don't want you to take a break, because I want to know how this story ends, but on the other hand I want you to take a break because I don't want this story to end. Eh, life's hard.

29th Nov 2018, 4:57 PM edit | delete | reply

Haha I was really happy with that expression. such a smug git he is.
maybe if I just slow down updates for a bit while i work on the other thing? idk we'll see

28th Nov 2018, 5:33 PM edit | delete | reply

inb4 "Just a couple of pages back?" but since I have only now started looking at it... When was the last time Suit Jerry called Dylan by his name?
(EDIT: I checked. Yeah. Just a couple of pages back. So it is probably just the tone Suit Jerry is using with Dylan, huh.)
Compared to (Ghost) Jerry who often calls him either Dylan or Dyl.
Minor thing but it is really like Dylan is mostly talking to himself in what Suit Jerry says to him. Sonny, the solution is right in front of you. You are repeating this conversation and your actions of running away like for the third time here. Confess to Suit Jerry how you really felt and perhaps he shall go away then. If he is really the deeper side of you. Easier said than done, eh?

30th Nov 2018, 12:27 PM edit | delete | reply

yeah suit jerry's really supposed to be reflecting what dylan's thinking, so i'm glad that shows

only time will tell about the rest :}

28th Nov 2018, 7:49 PM edit | delete | reply

Yeep, sounds about right.

1st Dec 2018, 2:07 PM edit | delete | reply

not a surprise, huh?

28th Nov 2018, 7:51 PM edit | delete | reply

Fascinating, one mystery down, a bunch more to go...

30th Nov 2018, 5:34 PM edit | delete | reply

Fix one compilation error, get three more the one was hiding.
Get one mystery, realize it introduces three more linked to the one's conclusions.
Huh... Now I have to ponder the parallels ;D

But I suppose the word "analysis" has one defined meaning so it is probably not surprising at all! :D

29th Nov 2018, 12:25 AM edit | delete | reply

I don't buy Suit Jerry's explanation. Or at the very least, it's deliberately cryptic/misleading to be a lie of omission. Being possessed, for instance, would qualify as being 'part of you' and explain why Jerry Prime couldn't see him.

30th Nov 2018, 1:03 AM edit | delete | reply

Agreed, Wooster. Back when I was speculating on who SJ is, I figured this was the least likely possibility because… it's just a bit odd? I've been assuming ghosts because otherwise… what's with Dylan hallucinating about Rob? How did Jerry know where Rob is? I mean, Dyl might have offed Rob and forgot about it…?

Sure, it increases my estimated likelihood that this is what's going on. However, we already know that SJ was torturing Dyl regardless off his identity—so if he's someone else, he's certainly motivated to lie and further mess with Dyl's head.

30th Nov 2018, 12:25 PM edit | delete | reply

I can't believe you both don't completely trust suit jerry, he's been so reliable this whole time :¬)

30th Nov 2018, 6:10 PM edit | delete | reply

"Suit Jerry for PM! An entity you can trust!" :D

1st Dec 2018, 11:56 AM edit | delete | reply

i mean you know for SURE he's trying to screw you over
he's very reliable like that

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