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Author Note

5th Sep 2018, 3:38 PM edit | delete

my punkass computer didn't want to let me upload this



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5th Sep 2018, 3:41 PM edit | delete | reply

Aw gosh D:
The moment is finally here
Aw man
Poor both of them


5th Sep 2018, 3:53 PM edit | delete | reply

I hope you enjoy seeing teenage boys cry


5th Sep 2018, 3:54 PM edit | delete | reply

(SCREAMING AND HOLLERING)


5th Sep 2018, 4:38 PM edit | delete | reply

he knoooooooows
Took him long enough, huh?


5th Sep 2018, 4:08 PM edit | delete | reply

Jerry starts angrily putting on his prom suit as the revelation cracks open

Wait no there's a scene where suit Jerry and Jerry are coexisting

But that would have been great


5th Sep 2018, 4:22 PM edit | delete | reply

Just five pages of dylan silently watching jerry struggle with his tie


5th Sep 2018, 5:18 PM edit | delete | reply

in mounting horror


5th Sep 2018, 5:03 PM edit | delete | reply

(;_;)

For a split second I thought Dylan was about to try to worm his way out of it. But boy oh boy, panel 4.


5th Sep 2018, 5:24 PM edit | delete | reply

man, he just wants to ignore it
That it happened and that he just blurted it out


5th Sep 2018, 5:16 PM edit | delete | reply

It's all been building up to this...

I almost don't want to see the next page,* it's going to hurt

*except I totally do


5th Sep 2018, 7:05 PM edit | delete | reply

Four years and a reboot and we're FInally here ;u;
It was hard not to move this scene to earlier but i needed dylan to be sufficiently... broken :}


5th Sep 2018, 5:52 PM edit | delete | reply

If I were Jerry, I'd probably sit there dumbfounded and empty for a bit.

But this is Jerry. My guess is that his temper comes out, as well as his asshole side we often forget while feeling sorry for him.


5th Sep 2018, 6:33 PM edit | delete | reply

Agreed. We might get a real picture of who Suit Jerry is as well since Dylan finally admitted to what Suit Jerry pressured him into.

Also... I do not believe it much but my guess is that Jerry is going to handle this calmly and maybe even understand it somewhat since now is the time to finally settle certain past differences. But... Dunno. It is definitely not like Dylan just told him something minor :/


5th Sep 2018, 8:55 PM edit | delete | reply

Stunned silence is probably the best case scenario, but what's the worst that could happen? :}
Ehehe


5th Sep 2018, 6:00 PM edit | delete | reply

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA


5th Sep 2018, 8:00 PM edit | delete | reply

y e s


5th Sep 2018, 6:31 PM edit | delete | reply

The fifth panel hits you straight in the feels in a way that chokes your throat and rises your heartbeat and you reflexively bite your thumb. Okay, but that is what I did ;_;
How do you do it??

I... have nothing. There was still a last second chance of Jerry really going "Huh?" like I hoped with the "What?" but no. No more screwing around. He finally put it all together.

As heavy as it is. Probably for the best. Seriously.
And I think this invalidates the possibility someone else did it? In my eyes that would take away everything you built with this atmosphere so that is what I am thinking...


5th Sep 2018, 7:35 PM edit | delete | reply

I look for the words that make me feel something in my stomach, you know? Cuz that's kind of how they're feeling now, like the bottom just dropped out of your stomach.

Yep, no way out for Dylan now. it's crunch time >:) Though even if somehow it wasn't him, he still spent the first chapters thinking it was and not caring -at all-


5th Sep 2018, 6:40 PM edit | delete | reply

Wow… this is… God I need a moment.





Going into Raining Knives, I always assumed that Jerry would learn about his murderer by some slip of the tongue, or piecing together all the things that don't fit about Rob murdering him. To have Dylan just confess, without the standard mystery reveal tropes, makes this scene much more… honest? vulnerable? personable? I'm having a hard time thinking of the word that best describes the mood, but you really nailed it. And… the fact that Dylan started the story as an emotionless wall and over the corse of the comic broke down… it really amplified the emotional impact here.

Thank-you so much for all your hard work over the past few years to bring us to this point.


5th Sep 2018, 7:59 PM edit | delete | reply

hehe I always wanted Dylan to outright say it. Could've had Jerry see it in the vision a few pages ago but I guess this is more like Dylan admitting it to himself as well. I dunno, it just had to come from him.


Thank you very much! :> I really hope you enjoy the rest of the story!


6th Sep 2018, 8:41 PM edit | delete | reply

I was going to use word things but I'm too overwhelmed and Wooster word-thinged better than I ever could.

^^^ What Wooster said with an extra helping of awe and thanks.


5th Sep 2018, 8:45 PM edit | delete | reply

man i’m just... speechless... i can’t believe it finally happened


5th Sep 2018, 8:56 PM edit | delete | reply

Me neither :>


5th Sep 2018, 11:30 PM edit | delete | reply

Panel 4 is scrumptious! Feed me more pain & angst, Moth! MORE!!!

AAAAAAAAAAA


6th Sep 2018, 6:59 AM edit | delete | reply

Be prepared for a FEAST


6th Sep 2018, 10:02 PM edit | delete | reply

YES, GOOD!


6th Sep 2018, 1:00 AM edit | delete | reply

gET HIM JERRY


6th Sep 2018, 7:00 AM edit | delete | reply

SMACK HIM RIGHT IN THE YAPPER


6th Sep 2018, 10:50 AM edit | delete | reply

Ugh! This is so good...yes more angst please!


6th Sep 2018, 3:20 PM edit | delete | reply

Thank you! I got plenty of angst to serve up


7th Sep 2018, 11:02 PM edit | delete | reply

"Oh. Well, GOOD! I didn't want some retard like ROB killing me!"

:D


8th Sep 2018, 2:15 PM edit | delete | reply

he'd rather die by the hands of his weird nerd brother?


8th Sep 2018, 7:07 AM edit | delete | reply

OH man......this page...the feels!

I can't imagine what Dylan must be feeling. I couldn't live with myself..


8th Sep 2018, 2:15 PM edit | delete | reply

UH HUH, I don't know if it would've been better or worse for him if Jerry hadn't come back!



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