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Author Note

14th Sep 2016, 4:17 PM edit | delete

Look out, it's a SUDDEN CHANGE IN TONE



Comments

14th Sep 2016, 7:00 PM edit | delete | reply

Ooh... Man, silence hurts.

Nice change in tone. The hard shift to natural lighting is striking from the previous page.


14th Sep 2016, 10:05 PM edit | delete | reply

I don't know if silence is any better when you're expecting it, or if that's just worse.

I just hope the sudden transition isn't too jarring!


14th Sep 2016, 7:10 PM edit | delete | reply

Wear red like the blood on your hands >:(

Curious to see what Dad is thinking. He must be getting quite nervous...


14th Sep 2016, 9:12 PM edit | delete | reply

He's probably still asleep at this point. Sleeping in blissful ignorance.


14th Sep 2016, 7:26 PM edit | delete | reply

i like this reboot!! i was really attached to the old one but i'm excited to see how this goes~ i really love the art style. i loved the old one too though. i love all of your art.


14th Sep 2016, 9:33 PM edit | delete | reply

Yaay thank you! There're actually a few pages with exactly the same content as the old version, so it's not even totally gone ^^

(wooah I haven't seen you around in aaages, how are you?)


14th Sep 2016, 10:03 PM edit | delete | reply

oh, that's cool! i love seeing the differences and similarities!

thanks for asking, i'm doing well~ i took a break from cf but i gave in and so i'll be here for a bit. you?


14th Sep 2016, 10:31 PM edit | delete | reply

I'm being slowly crushed by the weight of school work generally pretty good, thanks! :>


14th Sep 2016, 10:18 PM edit | delete | reply

I know a serious matter is at hand considering what happened just a page ago, but

the clouds are so pretty


14th Sep 2016, 10:34 PM edit | delete | reply

hehe
Over the next few pages, I discovered that drawing clouds is my true calling.


15th Sep 2016, 9:39 AM edit | delete | reply

psst! Just a tiny little whisper to let you know I'm here and reading ^3^

I can't lie, I do miss the old pages! But that said, I'm still excited to see how you'll be doing the reboot. :D *cheers for mothtrap*


15th Sep 2016, 5:57 PM edit | delete | reply

Yaay you're still here :D
Aah I'm sorry about the old pages! But like I said to Adina, some of the new pages are pretty much the same but in the new style, so there's that at least ^^;


15th Sep 2016, 10:38 AM edit | delete | reply

I just noticed the reboot. The new style is much better, congrats on your work. I look forward to reading more.


15th Sep 2016, 6:00 PM edit | delete | reply

Thanks! I hope you enjoy it~


15th Sep 2016, 3:19 PM edit | delete | reply

I get nosebleeds so often it's gotten to the point where I don't even know they're happening sometimes, because I've learned to just ignore it. lol

Many of my friends have freaked out when I just start bleeding from my face randomly, so I know that feel (sobs quietly)

DAmn thAT CHanGE Of toNE WHAAaaaAaat


15th Sep 2016, 5:27 PM edit | delete | reply

I'd had never had a nosebleed until this year, when I got a sinus infection and it bled on and off in tiny amounts for like two weeks.

Who was expecting that sudden tone change, not me that's for sure


17th Sep 2016, 12:09 PM edit | delete | reply

I love it that even with the more natural lighting the red theme continues, like it's following Dylan around.


17th Sep 2016, 4:46 PM edit | delete | reply

He normally wears at least one red thing. Red is definitely his colour :>


20th Oct 2016, 10:32 AM edit | delete | reply

That intro was brilliantly done. A couple of unnecessarily blunt pages, in my opinion, but it's possible people might not grasp the situation a hundred percent without them so they still have a place.

You managed to say so much about your characters in so few words and pictures, not to mention the fantastic use if expression and tone. I'm really enjoying this so far.



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